Story Board Feedback

We received feedback for our photo storyboard, the feedback was quite positive and the lecturers where happy with how our story turned out, they particularly liked the twist to the end of the story and they said that some of the shots really stood out and were framed well. However they told us to watch out for things such as focus as some of the photo's weren't as sharp as they should have been. This is just a lesson to take our time on the next project and make sure everything is perfect.
Below is my favourite shot from the story board, and one of the lecturers favourites also, I really like the composition and the actor (my friend Kayleigh) really shows the emotion the character would have been feeling as they angrily ran away from home -