Collective Intelligence Feedback

For my first uni assignment, the feedback was quite positive. I received a good mark for my first attempt at a wiki. The comments noted that links to other resources would have made the information stand out more and made it more understandable in the sense that it would have been put into context. This is something I can work on in future assignments, by branching out and finding other resources, rather than just stick to the specific text. The feedback comments also noted that the information is a little repetitive, this just means that I'll need to make sure to proofread my work before submission. There is also a note that while there are links placed in the threads, there are no comments about these links and what they mean in relation to the book. From this, if i am asked to create another wiki, I at least know what will be expected of me, to analyse the content, not just summarise and find out other peoples views on such a subject to make the information more diverse and less one sided. However this being my first uni assignment I am happy with my overall effort and achievement.